“Dead Man’s POWER!
I’ve never quite seen a dead man wash upon a shore before. But if I was to actually see a dead man wash up from some kind of river or ocean, I would probably go crazy! That’s just not normal for an ordinary life girl.
But it seems as if there are strange people who would think that a washed up man is so great? I really think that they are hallucinating over the fact. Which means im talking about you village people. You see a dead handsome man come upon shore and you treat him as if he’s royalty. Like get serious, the man’s DEAD!
Okay yeah, the man is gorgeous but you can’t place a title on him until you actually know him. Which apparently you can not! People look at me and think im stuck up. But am I really? Of course not!
There are not many exciting scenes that I see often. But I rather keep it that way, then to see ole Esteban wash up behind my yard or something! He may be handsome, but I rather know that he is no where to be found on any of the land I live on!!
By: Destine’ Wells
I love how you put feeling into your writing. It caught my attention and you also compared it with your life and the way people think of you. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI like how you compared the story to your own life and how some people judge people of of how they look.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you compared your life and this story to each other! I also like the way you were honest, because I'd freak out if a huge, dead body washed up to shore beside me too! Good job!
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